Bride of ashes

Book: Bride of Ashes by Alaya Wells

Reviewed by Your_bookish_fantasy

Rating: 3.5/5

๐“๐“ž ๐“ข๐“Ÿ๐“ž๐“˜๐“›๐“”๐“ก๐“ข
โšœ๏ธ๐”ป๐•–๐•ฅ๐•’๐•š๐•๐•–๐•• ๐•ฃ๐•–๐•ง๐•š๐•–๐•จ ๐• ๐•—- Bride of Ashes audio book & book

๐ˆ ๐š๐ฆ ๐š ๐ฌ๐ญ๐ซ๐ข๐œ๐ญ ๐ซ๐ž๐ฏ๐ข๐ž๐ฐ๐ž๐ซ ๐š๐ง๐ ๐ฒ๐ž๐ญ ๐ญ๐ก๐ž ๐€๐ฎ๐ญ๐ก๐จ๐ซ ๐š๐ง๐ NetGalley
๐ค๐ข๐ง๐๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐ญ๐ซ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ญ๐ž๐ ๐ฆ๐ž ๐ฐ๐ข๐ญ๐ก ๐š๐ง ๐€LC ๐œ๐จ๐ฉ๐ฒ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ซ๐ž๐ฏ๐ข๐ž๐ฐ, ๐ข๐ ๐ฅ๐ข๐ค๐ž ๐ญ๐จ ๐ฌ๐š๐ฒ ๐ญ๐ก๐š๐ง๐ค ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ ๐ญ๐จ ๐›๐จ๐ญ๐ก ๐š๐ฌ ๐ข ๐ฉ๐ฎ๐›๐ฅ๐ข๐ฌ๐ก ๐ฆ๐ฒ ๐ฏ๐ž๐ซ๐ฒ ๐ก๐จ๐ง๐ž๐ฌ๐ญ ๐ญ๐ก๐จ๐ฎ๐ ๐ก๐ญ๐ฌ ๐จ๐ง ๐ญ๐ก๐ข๐ฌ ๐›๐จ๐จ๐ค.

โšœ๏ธโ„๐•’๐•ฅ๐•š๐•Ÿ๐•˜๐•ค-
๐Ÿ—ฃ ๐—ก๐—ฎ๐—ฟ๐—ฟ๐—ฎ๐˜๐—ผ๐—ฟ Reese grey โญ๏ธโญ๏ธ and Rowan Heyes โญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธ (out of 5 stars, my rating scale is at the end)

๐Ÿ“š ๐—ฆ๐˜๐—ผ๐—ฟ๐˜† โญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธ.5 / 5

๐ŸŒก๏ธ ๐—ฆ๐—ฝ๐—ถ๐—ฐ๐—ฒ๐ŸŒถ๐Ÿซ‘ / 5 -๐‘โ„Ž๐‘’๐‘๐‘˜ ๐‘œ๐‘ข๐‘ก ๐‘š๐‘ฆ ๐บ๐‘œ๐‘œ๐‘‘๐‘Ÿ๐‘’๐‘Ž๐‘‘๐‘  ๐‘ โ„Ž๐‘’๐‘™๐‘ฃ๐‘’๐‘  ๐‘œ๐‘› ๐‘š๐‘ฆ ๐‘Ÿ๐‘’๐‘ฃ๐‘–๐‘’๐‘ค ๐‘“๐‘œ๐‘Ÿ ๐‘‘๐‘’๐‘ก๐‘Ž๐‘–๐‘™๐‘’๐‘‘ ๐‘ ๐‘๐‘–๐‘๐‘’ ๐‘š๐‘–๐‘๐‘Ÿ๐‘œ๐‘ก๐‘Ÿ๐‘œ๐‘๐‘’๐‘ 

Which books have I also given this same rating? (๐‘ ๐‘œ ๐‘ฆ๐‘œ๐‘ข ๐‘๐‘Ž๐‘› ๐‘๐‘œ๐‘š๐‘๐‘Ž๐‘Ÿ๐‘’ ๐‘š๐‘ฆ ๐‘ ๐‘ก๐‘ฆ๐‘™๐‘’๐‘œ๐‘“ ๐‘Ÿ๐‘Ž๐‘ก๐‘–๐‘›๐‘” ๐‘ก๐‘œ ๐‘ฆ๐‘œ๐‘ข๐‘Ÿ ๐‘œ๐‘ค๐‘›)

5โญ๏ธ Fourth wing / Bound by inked flame / Anathama / The Lies of Lena / Of silver and Curses
4.5โญ๏ธ Bitten / The Female / Quicksilver / Bride / Lights Out / A Bargain so Bloody
4โญ๏ธ Spellcaster / One Dark Window / From Blood and Ash / Phantasma / Butcher & Blackbird
3โญ๏ธWe Who Will Die / The Wolf King / Daughter of No Worlds / The Ex Hex

โšœ๏ธ๐•‚๐•–๐•ช ๐•€๐•Ÿ๐•—๐• :
๐ŸŽง 15 ๐—›๐—ผ๐˜‚๐—ฟ๐˜€ 30 ๐— ๐—ถ๐—ป๐˜‚๐˜๐—ฒ๐˜€ (I ๐š•๐š’๐šœ๐š๐šŽ๐š— ๐š˜๐š— 1.45 ๐šœ๐š™๐šŽ๐šŽ๐š)

๐Ÿ“– 584 ๐—ฃ๐—ฎ๐—ด๐—ฒ๐˜€

๐น๐‘–๐‘Ÿ๐‘ ๐‘ก ๐‘๐‘’๐‘Ÿ๐‘ ๐‘œ๐‘› multi ๐—ฃ๐—ข๐—ฉ / # ๐š๐šž๐šŠ๐š• ๐šœ๐š๐šข๐š•๐šŽ ๐š—๐šŠ๐š›๐šŠ๐š๐š’๐š˜๐š—

๐—ฅ๐—ฒ๐—น๐—ฒ๐—ฎ๐˜€๐—ฒ ๐—ฑ๐—ฎ๐˜๐—ฒ- 01 March 2025

๐—ฃ๐—น๐—ผ๐˜ or ๐—–๐—ต๐—ฎ๐—ฟ๐—ฎ๐—ฐ๐˜๐—ฒ๐—ฟ driven? ๐’ž๐’ฝ๐’ถ๐“‡๐’ถ๐’ธ๐“‰โ„ฏ๐“‡

๐—ฆ๐—ฒ๐—ฟ๐—ถ๐—ฒ๐˜€ ๐—ก๐—ฎ๐—บ๐—ฒ & ๐—•๐—ผ๐—ผ๐—ธ ๐—ป๐—ผ- Kingdom of Shadow and Ruin Book 1

๐—”๐˜ƒ๐—ฎ๐—ถ๐—น๐—ฎ๐—ฏ๐—น๐—ฒ on ๐—ž๐—จ? โœ…๐’ดโ„ฏ๐“ˆ.

๐—ฃ๐—ฎ๐—ฐ๐—ฒ- ๐“‚โ„ฏ๐’น๐’พ๐“Š๐“‚

๐— ๐—ฒ๐—บ๐—ผ๐—ฟ๐—ฎ๐—ฏ๐—น๐—ฒ? โŒ ๐’ฎ๐’ถ๐’น๐“๐“Ž, ๐“ƒโ„ด, ๐“ƒโ„ด๐“‰ ๐“Š๐“ƒ๐’พ๐“†๐“Šโ„ฏ โ„ฏ๐“ƒโ„ด๐“Š๐‘”๐’ฝ, ๐’พ๐“‰๐“ˆ ๐“Œโ„ฏ๐“๐“ ๐“Œ๐“‡๐’พ๐“‰๐“‰โ„ฏ๐“ƒ ๐’ท๐“Š๐“‰ ๐’น๐’พ๐’น๐“ƒ๐“‰ ๐“ˆ๐“‰๐’ถ๐“ƒ๐’น โ„ด๐“Š๐“‰ โ„ฏ๐“ƒโ„ด๐“Š๐‘”๐’ฝ ๐’ปโ„ด๐“‡ ๐“‚โ„ฏ ๐“‰โ„ด ๐“‡โ„ฏ๐’ธ๐’ถ๐“๐“ ๐’พ๐“ƒ ๐“ˆ๐’ถ๐“Ž 6 ๐“‚โ„ด๐“ƒ๐“‰๐’ฝ๐“ˆ ๐“‰๐’พ๐“‚โ„ฏ.

๐€๐ง๐ฒ ๐‘๐ž๐ฉ๐ซ๐ž๐ฌ๐ž๐ง๐ญ๐š๐ญ๐ข๐จ๐ง? (Disability, plus size, mental health etc...)โŒ

โ„ณโ„ดโ„ด๐’น๐“ˆ; ๐‘บ๐’•๐’†๐’‚๐’Ž๐’š, ๐‘พ๐’Š๐’•๐’•๐’š, ๐‘ฏ๐’๐’‘๐’†๐’‡๐’–๐’, ๐‘ท๐’“๐’†๐’…๐’Š๐’„๐’•๐’‚๐’ƒ๐’๐’† ๐’ƒ๐’–๐’• ๐’”๐’‚๐’•๐’Š๐’”๐’‡๐’š๐’Š๐’๐’ˆ, ๐‘ด๐’š๐’”๐’•๐’†๐’“๐’Š๐’๐’–๐’”, ๐‘ป๐’†๐’๐’”๐’†,๐‘ญ๐’๐’“๐’†๐’ƒ๐’๐’…๐’Š๐’๐’ˆ

๐’Ÿ๐’พ๐’น ๐’พ โ„ฏ๐“ƒ๐’ฟโ„ด๐“Ž ๐“‰๐’ฝ๐’พ๐“ˆ?โœ…

๐’ฒ๐’พ๐“๐“ ๐’พ ๐“‡โ„ฏ๐’ถ๐’น ๐“‰๐’ฝโ„ฏ ๐“ƒโ„ฏ๐“๐“‰ ๐’ทโ„ดโ„ด๐“€ ๐’พ๐“ƒ ๐“‰๐’ฝ๐’พ๐“ˆ ๐“ˆโ„ฏ๐“‡๐’พโ„ฏ๐“ˆ?โœ…

๐’ฒโ„ด๐“Š๐“๐’น ๐’พ ๐“‡โ„ฏ๐’ถ๐’น ๐’ถ๐“ƒ๐“Ž๐“‰๐’ฝ๐’พ๐“ƒ๐‘” โ„ฏ๐“๐“ˆโ„ฏ ๐’ท๐“Ž ๐“‰๐’ฝ๐’พ๐“ˆ ๐’ถ๐“Š๐“‰๐’ฝโ„ด๐“‡?โœ…

๐–‚๐–๐–” ๐–œ๐–”๐–š๐–‘๐–‰ ๐–Ž ๐–—๐–Š๐–ˆ๐–”๐–’๐–’๐–Š๐–“๐–‰ ๐–™๐–๐–Ž๐–˜ ๐–™๐–”?

โšœ๏ธ๐•Šโ„™๐”ผโ„‚๐•€๐”ผ๐•Š ๐•€โ„• ๐•Š๐•‹๐•†โ„๐•:
๐Ÿงโ€โ™€๏ธ๐”ฝ๐•’๐•–
โœจ๐”‡๐”ฏ๐”ž๐”ค๐”ฌ๐”ซ๐”ฐ

โšœ๏ธ๐•Š๐•ก๐•š๐•”๐•– ๐”ฝ๐•’๐•”๐•ฅ๐•ค:
๐Ÿ”ฅ๐’๐ฅ๐จ๐ฐ ๐๐ฎ๐ซ๐ง
๐Ÿฅต๐’Ÿ๐’พ๐“‡๐“‰๐“Ž ๐’ฏ๐’ถ๐“๐“€
๐Ÿ˜Iแ‘ŽีTแ—ฉ แ’ชOแฏแ—ด แ’ชแ‘Œแ”•T
๐Ÿ™๐ป๐‘’ ๐‘“๐‘Ž๐‘™๐‘™๐‘  ๐‘“๐‘–๐‘Ÿ๐‘ ๐‘ก
๐Ÿ’Œแด€ส€ส€แด€ษดษขแด‡แด… แดแด€ส€ส€ษชแด€ษขแด‡
๐Ÿ‘ฉโ€โค๏ธโ€๐Ÿ‘จ๐™ต๐šŠ๐š๐šŽ๐š ๐™ผ๐šŠ๐š๐šŽ๐šœ
๐Ÿ™… ๐•ฝ๐–Š๐–๐–Š๐–ˆ๐–™๐–Š๐–‰ ๐•ธ๐–†๐–™๐–Š๐–˜
๐Ÿ’‹๐’ฎ๐“…๐’พ๐’ธโ„ฏ ๐’พ๐“ƒ๐’ธ๐“‡โ„ฏ๐’ถ๐“ˆโ„ฏ๐“ˆ ๐“Œ๐’พ๐“‰๐’ฝ โ„ฏ๐’ถ๐’ธ๐’ฝ ๐’ทโ„ดโ„ด๐“€
๐ŸŒก๐•๐•–๐•’๐•ฃ๐•Ÿ๐•š๐•Ÿ๐•˜, ๐”ธ๐•Ÿ๐•˜๐•ค๐•ฅ, ๐•‹๐•–๐•Ÿ๐•ค๐•š๐• ๐•Ÿ
๐Ÿ”บ ๐ฟ๐‘œ๐‘ฃ๐‘’ ๐‘ก๐‘Ÿ๐‘–๐‘Ž๐‘›๐‘”๐‘™๐‘’

โšœ๏ธ๐•‹โ„๐•†โ„™๐”ผ๐•Š
๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐•Š๐•–๐•”๐•ฃ๐•–๐•ฅ๐•ค & ๐”น๐•–๐•ฅ๐•ฃ๐•’๐•ช๐•’๐•๐•ค
๐Ÿ”ฎ๐”“๐”ฏ๐”ฌ๐”ญ๐”ฅ๐”ข๐” ๐”ฆ๐”ข๐”ฐ ๐”ž๐”ซ๐”ก ๐”๐”ถ๐”ฐ๐”ฑ๐”ข๐”ฏ๐”ฆ๐”ข๐”ฐ
๐Ÿ‘‘๐“ก๐“ธ๐”‚๐“ช๐“ต ๐“ฒ๐“ท๐“ฝ๐“ป๐“ฒ๐“ฐ๐“พ๐“ฎ
๐Ÿงฌ ๐”๐ง๐ค๐ง๐จ๐ฐ๐ง ๐๐จ๐ฐ๐ž๐ซ ๐‹๐ž๐š๐ซ๐ง๐ข๐ง๐ 
๐Ÿ•ฏ๏ธCursed Kingdom
๐ŸคฉEpic Side Characters
๐Ÿฆโ€โฌ›Animal Sidekick
๐Ÿ’ˆ แ—ทแ—ฉแ‘ŽTแ—ดแ–‡
โ˜ ๏ธ๐•‹๐• ๐•ฆ๐•”๐•™ ๐•™๐•–๐•ฃ ๐•’๐•Ÿ๐••...
๐Ÿ‘‘Shadow Daddy

๐‘บ๐’‰๐’๐’–๐’๐’… ๐’š๐’๐’– ๐‘น๐‘ฌ๐‘จ๐‘ซ ๐’Š๐’• ๐’๐’“, ๐‘ณ๐‘ฐ๐‘บ๐‘ป๐‘ฌ๐‘ต ๐’•๐’ ๐’Š๐’•?
(๐‘Šโ„Ž๐‘Ž๐‘ก๐‘  ๐‘๐‘’๐‘ ๐‘ก- ๐ต๐‘œ๐‘œ๐‘˜ ๐‘œ๐‘Ÿ ๐ด๐‘ข๐‘‘๐‘–๐‘œ?)
READ IT! the audiobook was awful.

๐”ธ๐•ฆ๐••๐•š๐•  ๐”น๐• ๐• ๐•œ โ„๐•–๐•ง๐•š๐•–๐•จ:
The female narrator in herself was ok, but this particular performance utterly awful. Truly BAD! First of all the recording volume was all over the place, extremely loud one second, then fading back, then far away and really quiet. Itโ€™s like she was on a rocking chair swinging closer and then far away from the microphone. Her characters were impossible to tell apart, they all sounded the same so I got lost so many times with who was supposed to be speaking! Her enthusiasm was also lacking, there was SOME vocal inflection toward the last 20% but not enough. Then there is the quality of the sound, very tin-ey, high pitched with awful sounds around the tsss xsss ppsss characters. This is especially obvious immediately after one of the male chapters as his voice is so deep and dark and low.
So, speaking of the male narrator, he was good, there wasnโ€™t too much difference between characters though, his tonal changes and attitude toward the script was good, he offered easy listening and believable words that you could follow along with. There were no breathy moments or true emotion in his voice but there was some effort there. Iโ€™d listen to him again anyway. But definitely not the female.

๐ŸŒ ๐•Ž๐• ๐•ฃ๐•๐•• ๐•“๐•ฆ๐•š๐•๐••๐•š๐•Ÿ๐•˜, ๐•จ๐•ฃ๐•š๐•ฅ๐•š๐•Ÿ๐•˜ ๐•’๐•Ÿ๐•• ๐•ก๐•’๐•”๐•š๐•Ÿ๐•˜:

Fort of all that ending was brilliant! I really wish the author had a better team around her because the skeleton of the story and the characters are brilliant! But the execution needed a little polishing.

There is a lot of repetitive moments in this story, even 80% in were still getting an internal monologue of her dead lover and her guiltโ€ฆ I get it, I do, but this guilt is described the same was each time. Shut up and get on with itโ€ฆ very annoying!
There was also repeats with the world building and class system. This author writes in a juvenile way, it was easy to follow along with but annoyingโ€ฆ mainly because the premise was actually really good, with another round of edits and a decent beta team this could have been so much better, so many silly mistakes and simple to correct errors.

The pacing repeatedly got slowed down by the stuttering of the worldly descriptions. Instead of giving us nice details, we got a whole info dump on everything, I sat her thinking- just get on with it already! Iโ€™m a huge fantasy reader, I can handle multiple characters and large world building clumps, but what this author did was unnecessary, padding out every little thing.

The ending was something I should have seen coming, I feel dumb having missed it actually, but none the less itโ€™s still brilliant! I got this as n advanced listener copy audiobook and I nearly DNF twice because of the female narrator but Iโ€™m glad I didnโ€™t and Iโ€™m literally off to by the next book as soon as Iโ€™ve finished writing this!

๐Ÿงโ€โ™‚๏ธ โ„‚๐•™๐•’๐•ฃ๐•’๐•”๐•ฅ๐•–๐•ฃ๐•ค:
The characters were my favourite part of the story, there were plenty to meet and it was easy to get to know them. Especially the little animal sidekick ! And there was some great flirting in the start, it soon stopped dead which was strange, I mean it met with the story but it was strange how strongly it was brought on to just drop out.

I loved both men in the love triangle, Iโ€™m a sucker for a good jealousy trope and so this was right up my street! And Iโ€™m a huge fan of fate mates so double whammy- add in the rejection and Iโ€™m hooked! I just there was more!

๐Ÿ˜ฅ ๐•Ž๐•™๐•ช ๐•Ÿ๐•  ๐•—๐•š๐•ง๐•– ๐•ค๐•ฅ๐•’๐•ฃ๐•ค?
It was the repeats mainly. And the stuttering descriptions that slowed the pacing right down.

โณ ๐•Ž๐• ๐•ฆ๐•๐•• ๐•š ๐•ฃ๐•–-๐•ฃ๐•–๐•’๐•• ๐• ๐•ฃ ๐•ฃ๐•–๐•”๐• ๐•ž๐•ž๐•–๐•Ÿ๐••?
Yes I would do both but thereโ€™s nothing that could get me to re-listen to the audio!

๐Ÿชง๐”ฝ๐•š๐•Ÿ๐•’๐• ๐•ฅ๐•™๐• ๐•ฆ๐•˜๐•™๐•ฅ๐•ค:
Perfect for fans of. Love triangle, rejected fated mates, commoner x royalty and independent, sassy FMCโ€™s! The plot had great bones and got its hooks deep into me- it had nothing to do with the animal sidekick. Nope. Nothing at all!

๐น๐‘œ๐‘™๐‘™๐‘œ๐‘ค ๐‘š๐‘’ ๐‘“๐‘œ๐‘Ÿ ๐‘š๐‘œ๐‘Ÿ๐‘’ ๐‘Ÿ๐‘’๐‘ฃ๐‘–๐‘’๐‘ค๐‘  ๐‘Ž๐‘›๐‘‘ ๐‘ ๐‘ข๐‘”๐‘”๐‘’๐‘ ๐‘ก๐‘–๐‘œ๐‘›๐‘ ;

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๐•„๐•ช โ„๐•’๐•ฅ๐•š๐•Ÿ๐•˜ ๐•Š๐•ช๐•ค๐•ฅ๐•–๐•ž๐•ค:
โญ๏ธ DNF

โญ๏ธโญ๏ธ
I managed to finish it but it was rubbish. I won't keep a physical copy and won't recommend it, but it's a shame as the plot could have made a good book in another author's hands

โญ๏ธโญ๏ธ.5
It was OK. I wish I didn't start this one as it didn't do it for me as I struggled to read it. It had an interesting premise that fell flat but I had to see what happened in the end.

โญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธ
I don't regret reading it, and I will read the next one, but this one did have a few flaws. [These could be repetitive writing, gaps or plot holes, better character growth or world building, areas needing more detail]
Generally, the book lacked depth and became confusing. The plot resonated with me even though it annoyed me on the whole.

โญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธ.5
I'm glad I read it. I enjoyed it and would recommend it to the right people, but I wanted more! Sadly, it's easily forgettable with a few issues I just couldn't overlook/get past.

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Good book! I loved it, but... I needed more! I really did enjoy it, but it had a few parts that needed more detail or added history/background or lore. But that's because the story or characters were memorable, and the plot was strong with brilliant twists. I would re-read if I needed to catch up for the next book and would recommend.

โญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธ.5
Great book! I truly wish the story had been thought about more, or the author had been given more time as this book is so close to brilliance! I will likely read again and will definitely be recommending it to all!

โญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธ
WOW! Absolutely amazing book! Well written with great characters and a plot so memorable that it will stay with me. I will definitely read this again, I will be recommending it and sharing it with the whole world! Also- I NEED A PHYSICAL COPY!

๐Ÿ”ฅโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธโญ๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ
This is my God level tier. The book must be perfectly memorable. Even after reading 50+ more books, I will remember character names and emotions along with the plot. If there is a special edition, then I need to own it! If there is a conversation on books- I'm talking about this!

SPICE SCALE:
๐ŸŒถ๏ธโ€“ segsual language and a little on-page action

๐ŸŒถ๏ธ๐ŸŒถ๏ธโ€“ a lot of segsual language and some on-page open door action, may be occurring a couple of times

๐ŸŒถ๏ธ๐ŸŒถ๏ธ๐ŸŒถ๏ธโ€“ a lot of explicit action and dirty talk, occurring frequently with 2/3 lurvers

๐ŸŒถ๏ธ๐ŸŒถ๏ธ๐ŸŒถ๏ธ๐ŸŒถ๏ธ โ€“ super graphic and explicit, occurring 4 or more times, can be more grey and taboo themed.

๐ŸŒถ๏ธ๐ŸŒถ๏ธ๐ŸŒถ๏ธ๐ŸŒถ๏ธ๐ŸŒถ๏ธ โ€“ Kinks and Fet!shism, explicit and super graphic. It is likely to be tushy play, toys, playrooms, and more dark / taboo fantasies and realities

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